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英二大作文

必备词汇
图表 chart / graph
饼图 pie chart
柱图 bar / column chart
线图 line chart
表格 table / diagram
从…到… from … to … / between … and …
比例(百分比) proportion / percentage / share
比率 rate / ratio
部分、某个 certain
数字 number (可数名词)
数字 amount (不可数名词)
数字 quantity (可数 / 不可数名词)
统计数字 statistics
大约 about / around / some / nearly / roughly / approximately
对比 in stark contrast / by contrast / conversely
转折 however / nevertheless / nonetheless
因果 as a result / as a consequence / consequently / therefore
同时 at the same time / meanwhile / in the meantime / simultaneously
类比 likewise / similarly
并列 while / whereas / and
上升 increase / go up / be on the rise / ascend / surge / soar / rocket (直线上升)
下降 decrease / go down / be on the decline / descend /drop / plunge / slump / plummet (直线下降)
急速 dramatically / significantly / sharply / considerably / tremendously / noticeably / notably
缓慢 gently / subtly / slightly / moderately / gradually / steadily / progressively
保持不变 remain steady / static / unchanged / unvariied
波动 fluctuate
account for / constitute / make up
分别 respectively
现象 phenomenon / situation
趋势 trend / tendency / inclination

总述

  • 第一段
    • A glance at the bar chart reveals ( that ) __ .
    • To be specific , __ .
  • 第二段
    • There two fundamental factors contributing to this social phenomenon .
    • The primary factor lies in __ (因素一) . __ (模板句) . As a result , __ (切题句) .
    • Furthermore , __ (因素二) may give rise to this social trend . __ (模板句) . Consequently , __ (切题句) .
  • 第三段
    • 积极 / 消极 / 双刃剑

第一段

  • A glance at the bar chart reveals ( that ) __ .
  • To be specific , __ .

动态图

  • __ increase / decrease dramatically / gently from __ in __ to __ in __ .
  • __ experience / enjoy (好) / suffer from (坏) a dramatic / gentle increase / decrease from __ to __ .
  • There is a dramatic / gentle increase / decrease from __ to __ in __ .
  • __ show an upward / a downward trend from __ to __ .

e.g. To be specific , the proportion of the Chinese brands increased sharply from 25% in 2008 to some 32% in 2009 . By stark contrast , that of the Japanese brands experienced a dramatic decline from 35% to nearly 25% in the same period .

静态图

  • __ account for / constitute / make up __ % of __ , the highest ratio among the __ categories .
    e.g. The students who travel for enjoying the scenery account for / constitute 37% of all the students in school .
  • Approximately / Nearly / Only __ % of __ __ .
    e.g. Only 9% of students travel for developing independence .
  • The percentage / proportion of __ is /reaches as much as __ .

e.g. To be specific , the money spent on New Year gifts account for 40% , the highest ratio among the four categories . Simultaneously , nearly 20% of the money is spent on parties and dinners , and / while another 20% on transportation . People use the remaining 20% for other purpose .


第二段

  • There two fundamental factors contributing to this social phenomenon .

  • The primary factor lies in __ (因素一) .

    __ (模板句) .
    ( __ 凑字数万能句 )
    As a result , __ (切题句) .

  • Furthermore , __ (因素二) may give rise to this social trend .
    __ (模板句) .
    Consequently , __ (切题句) .

因素
经济发展 economic growth
社会影响 social impact / influence
人口膨胀 population explosion
教育体系 education system
科技创新 technological innovation

经济

  • As one of the largest developing countries , China is enjoying rapid economic growth in the past few years .

社会

  • 社会压力
    With the quickening pace of urban life and ever-increasing pressure , people in growing numbers are suffering from either the physical or mental problems .
  • 就业困难
    As the job market is getting gloomy and competition is becoming fierce , it is increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job .
  • 积极向上
    Traditional way of thinking has changed dramatically , and people are exhibiting greater open-mindedness and a burning desire to determine their own destiny .

人口

  • China has a vast population and its substantial growth rate . However , fast increasing population has potentially negative results , such as intense competition .

科技

  • Time and again , science and technology has created wonders and even miracles , thus fortifying(加强) our belief in it .
  • The Internet has penetrated every aspect of daily life , greatly affecting our ways of communication .

凑字数万能句

  • This will definitely lead to / give rise to the phenomenon depicted in the chart .
  • Obviously , the tendency depicted in the chart can be well observed .
  • Accordingly , one can easily observe the phenomenon depicted in the chart .

第三段

  • 积极
    With regard to this social tendency , I believe it is inspiring and positive . (It is imperative(紧急的) that we should take actions to advocate this phenomenon .) As this trend is still in its infancy(初期) , we believe it will no doubt go further and lead to future prospect .
    关于这种社会趋势,我认为这是鼓舞人心和积极的。(我们必须采取行动来倡导这一现象。)由于这一趋势仍处于初级阶段,我们相信它无疑会走得更远,并带来未来的前景。
  • 消极
    To my knowledge , this social tendency is unfavorable . It is high time that we took actions to address the quandary(窘境) . I realize it needs to be slowed down since it has already posed negative impact to our society .
    据我所知,这种社会倾向是不利的。现在是我们采取行动解决这一难题的时候了。我意识到它需要放慢速度,因为它已经对我们的社会造成了负面影响。
  • 双刃剑
    To sum up , __ is just like a double-edged sword . In face of this phenomenon , we should be prudent . Given the levels of intelligence and discretion(判断力) imbued(灌输) in people , I an sure that most of them will be able to sidestep(回避) the potential drawbacks , while taking advantage of all its merits .
    总之,__ 就像一把双刃剑。面对这种现象,我们应该慎重。考虑到人们的智慧和判断力,我相信他们中的大多数人都能够避开潜在的缺点,同时利用其所有优点。
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